zxqmqwwqqtpt 发表于 2021-11-6 23:07   全显示 1楼
感觉这一类文章的口味应该重一点，注重描写凌辱、调教的过程。应该加一些人物的心里活动的描写，比如在催眠的初期过程中反抗的意识大一点。不然感觉就像在看纯粹的手枪文，希望作者加油！


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